NOTES

Notes on your screenplay are not the easiest thing in the world to come by; especially notes that come from an objective place. At Romero Pictures, we are not interested in helping writers for our own reasons or for any reasons that may infringe, encroach or, otherwise, denigrate the work. We are only interested in helping indie filmmakers make indie films.

That is why we don’t rake our clients over the coals. We don’t offer our services to get rich and we don’t offer our services to inject our own creative into anyone’s project(s).

Our NOTES PACKAGE is simple, straightforward and reasonably priced at $200.

Our clients receive a full set of Romero’s notes about their script that cover

• Technical issues such as formatting and terminology

• Story structure

• Character development

• Story / Character arcs

• General story flow

Dialogue Pass

Have you written and re-written your script to the point where you are happy, but it still feels a bit expositional and “draggy?” Maybe a Dialogue Pass is what you’re needing to get you and your script that much closer to shoot-ready.

For $500, Romero will complete a dialogue pass on your script from beginning to end and focus on:

• Shortening exposition

• Punching up conversational flow

• Distinguishing character voices

• Editing dialogue to fit within more of the industry standard of cadence